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Run boy
Posted by Fairy.Fort on 13th Mar 2021, 12:47 PM. Edit Delete Reply

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Deep down he's a big softy
Posted by Quadrant on 13th Mar 2021, 1:40 PM. Edit Delete Reply

You have no idea how squishy he really is
Posted by Fairy.Fort on 13th Mar 2021, 2:00 PM. Edit Delete Reply

Til that both wail on and whale on are grammatically correct....but whale still paints an odd picture!
Posted by TadaKiba on 13th Mar 2021, 8:02 PM. Edit Delete Reply

I really wanted to go with wail but I just knew some pedantic person would stroll in and correct me :x
Posted by Fairy.Fort on 13th Mar 2021, 8:19 PM. Edit Delete Reply

I love the tropes you're inverting.
The big, burly, highly-skilled warrior is usually the least...insightful...member of the group, but here you made her(!) the quick-witted, adorable, goofball.
The sorceress is usually the one being dragged kicking and screaming into her new role, but here she's enthusiastically seeking her destiny.
Posted by sigpig on 14th Mar 2021, 10:00 AM. Edit Delete Reply

Posted by Fairy.Fort on 14th Mar 2021, 10:48 AM. Edit Delete Reply